Saturday, 9 October 2010

Your beatiful words.

I melt into the ground by your beautiful words.  My body is made weak by you. I feel a pull through the rubble and fallen bricks; a magnetic impulse towards you.   The walls around me once so strong, and tall.  I was safe from you, and I was safe from me.  
But now, the earth beneath me cracks, trembling with emotion and fear that’s surging through my veins.  Overwhelming and empowering, blissful and terrifying, I wait and breath as the dust settles. 
As the walls were falling my body shook, quaking with the pain that came alongside my fear.  As I sit in the wreckage, I am helpless, completely at your mercy; the one place I vowed never to be.  I hand it to you, my heart on a silver platter, it is yours. 
I kneel and pray, curving my body over and resting my head on the cold stone of the earth.  I hope and beg that you will guard this precious gift; it is once again new and fresh.  You may think I would hand out such a precious item easily; I have never given it up like this. For you, I will hold out my hand willingly; the trust in you, I feel. 
When you talk to me, your voice, beautiful, soulful and honest; it falls though my body soaked up by every cell.  Word after word I listen.  To the gushings of these words I bow, honour in your presence.

2 comments:

  1. Like with all your work, it's so emotive, i can actually feel the emotions the character is displaying, as if i'm actually there. 'tis truly beautiful.

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  2. now that is one of nicest things a person has ever said to me, thankyou thakyou, thankyou XD

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